Jury Week 4

July 29, 2010 M. Liong

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Jury Member: Valerie

Jury: Raul Nijhorst

Woooowwwie… you are real frizzy hair models! This week there are again beautiful photos. The presentation has clearly been thought through and the texts with the photos also deserve a compliment. You praise the products and that is evident from the photos.

It's nice to see that the photos are better again. We can usually see the hairstyles well, the background and additional accessories are used and the photos are a lot less hectic than the previous times. You have clearly put a lot of thought into how you want to appear in the photo.

Great job again. Below are some things per model.

Model Carol

Well, you have certainly experienced the product well! You write very aptly about the effect of the product on your hair and scalp, but you also make it interesting with comparisons. Nice to read. The choice for the hairstyle is well argued, you can indeed see a healthy scalp, the braids are beautifully straight and shiny. The green colours of your own garden make it a fresh whole, exactly how you indicate how you feel. Your accessories match the garden. The last photo is a bit difficult, a pink eye-catching flower bush, your face a bit dark. But the attitude is relaxed and relaxed.

Model Consuela
In the text you let yourself be carried away by thoughts that come to mind when you use the product for your hair. The sula is very descriptive! It's a real shame about the dark photos. Your hair doesn't really stand out that way. That's a shame because you write so incredibly aptly and enthusiastically about the product and its effect on your hair and skin. And that doesn't really come back in the photos. The use of the jar and the bottle is good, funny to put it on your head, a bit crazy but it's possible! In the third photo your look is beautiful, very calm, just like you say you feel. Smooth, I hear.

Model Melanta
The spontaneity is evident. You have 'used' the various photos well; you are completely on it, there is a free photo and a good portrait. That is nicely chosen, that is what the viewer wants to see. You indicate that you had the feeling that you were doing something healthy. I think that the makers of the product would want to hear exactly that; a healthy product that gives your natural hair back, that brings out the good, it regains strength and suppleness. These two concepts are nicely reflected in your second photo. In the photos you wear your hair loose and natural. You have a beautiful smile that fits this product perfectly. Nice job!

Model Rachel
How incredibly clever of you to continue participating. I wish you much strength to bear the loss of a loved one.

Oelala, your last photo is original in size. That already draws attention. Maybe a pity about the wall, it does not really give a natural environment but it does give a calm image. Maybe next time you can put yourself more in the picture, a little more of you and a little less of the environment. It is wonderful that you have used the fresh green in your photos. The sun plays nicely with your skin. Too bad we can't see your hair a little better but you do describe in detail in your description how it feels for you. The product has done its job perfectly, from what I read.

Model Xaviera
Nice location right on the beach! Your smile also shows that you had a good time, you radiate in the photos. The yellow color fits nicely with this sunny and cheerful look of yours. Your locks look nice and full and healthy. Nice. You see that the two photos by the sea were taken from a different angle, the light is different so your hair is not so easy to distinguish. But the photos themselves make up for a lot, your poses are varied and because of that we see your hair from multiple positions. I think you write very pleasantly, it reads well.

For me this week Melanta is the winner. Her poses jump out, her hair jumps and moves beautifully (even in the photo we can almost see that J). Your liveliness and cheerfulness are in the foreground, we can't ignore it. Furthermore, it is good that we see various photos, your whole body (with which you also radiate something) and your healthy, treated hair (after all, you promote the product that has that effect on your hair). Technically, the photos are certainly not bad. Your descriptions match the photos and that is great.

Valerie Kross.

Carol , you are continuing to grow in taking photos.
Do you even see the difference when you look at the pictures of the first week and week 4? Keep it up! I like how you show the product and emphasize your refreshing scalp.
In this photo you show that very well. (see photo)

Consuela:
Nice how you put yourself with the product in the picture. You also clearly indicate what the product does for you. Too bad the pictures are still a bit dark. I thought this was your best picture (see picture)
Next time, please note that when you hold a product, for example,
fingers do not get in the way. So that the product is fully seen.

Melanta:

You really do have a lot of fun! You radiate that.

I really like how you play with the camera and create a new pose every time. In this photo, your smile and hair come out best. (see photo) Next time, make sure that the top is completely visible. Because I can see that you are holding your hair, but I see half of your hand in the photo.

Rachel:

Your photos look so tropical. Too bad you're not really in the picture. Because of the environment you're in, you kind of disappear. The leaves etc. stand out more than you do. I thought this was your best photo (see photo)

Xaviera:

You are starting to develop more and more as a model. Nice how you create different poses. This week the assignment was to create a Sula Style. I thought this was your best photo. (see photo)

Next time, just make sure you don't hold your arms so tight, so that you

posture will look a little more relaxed.

Feedback – Mireille

Carol:
All in all a good shoot. You look well into the camera. Beautiful close-ups, your hair is clearly visible and you have paid attention to the details, as can be seen from your earrings, ring, necklace and even nail polish. Even the flowers fit in. Although I find your smile pleasant and even attractive, I like the last 2 poses the most. They speak volumes. Your hand is beautifully relaxed, very nicely done. The only thing is that the photos seem a bit out of focus.

Consuela:
The first 2 photos are very original. You deserve a feather for originality. The photos are clearly better than last week in terms of light, but still a bit on the dark side. A very good tip for all models of a world photographer is to always look for the light with your face. You are the center of the photo, but the light does not fall entirely on you. The leaves are also somewhat distracting because of that.

Melanta:
You are always very cheerful in your shots. I think your smile would sell well. I especially like your 2nd pose, just like a swan, although the light is not optimal there. The one before the last close-up is very good. The shadow is not disturbing, your smile shows a beautiful set of teeth, and the radiant eyes, beautiful skin and of course your beautiful hair form a complete beautiful picture.

Rachel:
Your skin glows in Suriname, that is clearly visible. Using the beautiful green of the country in your photo is clever. It is just a pity that you see a lot of green while you yourself are relatively small in the picture. You should be the point of attention. Unfortunately that is not the case. Your hair is done nicely, I especially like the 2nd pose but unfortunately I see more background there than Rachel.

Xaviera:
Super shoot. I see your first shot as an advertisement for one of my hair products in a high end magazine. Your face to the light, your look, your skin and your cheerfully styled locs. Your 2nd photo is very sexy! Your legs look great only your hair seems less important so nice shot but not really for a hair commercial. Overall just good. This time there is not a shot where you are nothing.

For everyone: If you are taking photos outside, which is definitely preferable to indoors, make sure that the background is not busy with leaves or anything else that could distract from you, the model.

Thanks and see you soon!

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