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 Jury: Raul Nijhorst
Week 5 Miss Kinky Hair
Below is a short piece about the photo series made per model. I really enjoy seeing so much progress with everyone. Your looks are more varied, the poses are a bit more daring, more thought has been put into it. The combination of text and image works well. You are excellent representatives of proud bearers of frizzy hair!
Model Xaviera
Your choice to choose model moms is a correct one! You clearly state your motives and they are also reflected in the photos; affection for your child, love to the depths of the soul, even to tears. The forbiddenness does come forward. The editing of the photo works well here, dark colors, you empathize. Nice not to look into the cam. Good thinking. If you take the other photos to a go and see, make sure there is a full body. You have now chosen two radiant photos and one from above, but your entire appearance is something they are also curious about. Try to keep that variation in it.
Model Rachel
How enthusiastically you write about the products, you recommend them professionally and honestly. I would buy them! I find the series with white clothing very natural, jewelry is beautiful and classy, photos a bit dark. Your color is gorgeous, intensely beautiful brown. Your hair looks healthy and fresh. Now one last thing, with these kinds of 'fashionable' photos it's also about the small details. In the last photo there is something of the product on your back, that shines in the photo and therefore attracts attention. Now you don't see that, so that is more something for the photographer, but keep that in mind. Otherwise nice!
Model Melanta
You write nicely with the photos; and nice that your first photo also seems to show that you think about the assignment, about your improvisation. Nice profile too (photo 1), is good for a modeling agency to see that too. Top that preparation of yours. Going out without make-up, casual clothing. That's how they want to see it. Photos give me a good image. Models in motion feels good with you. The reasons are clear and it is fine that you are looking for an agency that suits you as a person. So thought about it. Photos are rough and wild, what you wanted to radiate. You certainly showed attitude. Compliments!
Model Consuela
Good choice to keep your clothing basic and classy. That brings out your natural appearance. Too bad we don't have a full-body photo of you. Now we don't really see your entire style. The third photo looks a bit absent and disinterested, something you are not at all. Certainly not when we read the fascinating stories with your photo, that's really nice. Your idea about being a role model appeals to me! The purple background looks fresh, just like you. Try to pay attention to the sharpness of your photos, that also ensures that we see all the details well (e.g. of your healthy hairstyle). Your choice for G&T is a safe but also a logical one. They know the market for dark models. And you profit from that!
Model Carol
You want to go big and international right away: off to Ulla Models. Hehe. Well, that's fine, you could do it too! That you want to radiate playfulness and a touch of mischief is definitely successful. High-end fashion is definitely visible in the second photo, your best shot I think. Although the one with the pink dress also scores high. You laugh fresh and girlish without being childish. Your series is successful. Compliments on your hair, it looks really nice.
This week the winner for me is:
– model Carol. The photos are successful, very varied and the hair is beautiful. All in all it is a complete processing of the assigned assignment. You tell why you choose Ulla Models, think of the right looks and make sure that you stand out among other models with your hairstyle. Tiptop done!
Mireille
Hello ladies,
This week I was pleasantly surprised again. The fact that Melanta was ill did not spoil the fun. I think this is one of the most fun assignments because your personality really comes to the fore. I have the feeling that I am really getting to know you now. And I think it is great that you grace kroeshaar.com!
Carol:
Fantastic shoot! The close ups are good, your hair is nice and wild, your look in the camera is perfect. The first photo of you is a really good start. Beautiful black and white, very daring and absolutely successful. I also like those color photos. Beautifully sunny and it looks like you are really into it. You keep surprising me with so many different looks. Well done!
Xaviera:
What we often see are women who enjoy motherhood and you radiate that. That is beautiful to see. You clearly care a lot about your cute son. And that the love is mutual radiates from the 3rd photo. I also think photo 3 is beautiful but it is a pity that I do not see a new series from you. You are always surprising but this time not so much because the background and such already seemed familiar.
Rachel:
So you did the Ametis Shoot because you had already done your shoot before you had read the message. So it was too short notice to do a new one. Now, I have to say your skin looks radiant! The Surinamese sun seems to be doing you good. Pose 3 is very good. Lovely attitude. Your hair is also done nicely but the photos seem a bit out of focus and the light is not quite right it seems. I think it can also be more close up for a makeup shoot so that you can see your beautiful skin well and therefore be able to recommend the product.
Melanta
Tough nonchalance: very well done! You also write wonderfully. I find it great to read what you can do quickly with your hair but you just take me along in how you approach the shoot and that is fun.
Your background is beautiful! Well chosen and your poses as always fit perfectly with what you radiate. Rough setting or not you always come across as inviting. The camera loves you. Definitely keep up the good work.
Consuela
You did a very smart job: GT Models, lol. You don't have to be ashamed of that Black dress because it suits you absolutely well. I like the last photo the best. Your pose may be a bit stiff but your figure looks great, also the accessories and your beautiful healthy hair. Too bad the photo is not sharp. It is not a sharp series everywhere. I liked the purple background. You look reasonably sharp there and your hair looks nice. Only the pose in photo 3 is not so flattering. You look like you are tired from a party. Always try to sit up straight and radiate a model.
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